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Example practice session

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So, um, I used to be terrified of speaking up in front of a group. I remember this one time I had to present my work. Um, my mind just went completely blank. I just rambled. Afterwards, I knew I had to do something. I started wait. No. I just began practicing on my own, talking into my phone, but listening back was rough. I could hear all the ums, but I didn't really know what else to fix. I just kept wishing there was an easier way to see if I was actually improving. Still, I kept at it, And fast forward a few months to the next time I had to speak up. I was still nervous, but I had a clear message. It wasn't about it wasn't about becoming a perfect speaker. The real win was, um, just feeling heard, and that made all the difference.
Your Speech Summary

You told a relatable story of working hard to improve public speaking, moving from freezing up to finding your voice and feeling heard.

Suggested version

149 → 130 words (-13%)

Framework: Story Arc

Setup → Conflict → Resolution

Setup

I used to be terrified of speaking up in front of a group. One time I had to present my work, and my mind went completely blank. I rambled through it, and afterward I knew I had to change something.

Conflict

I began practicing on my own by talking into my phone, but listening back was rough. I could hear the filler words, and I wasn't sure what to fix beyond that. Part of me wanted an easier way to tell whether I was improving, but I kept going anyway.

Resolution

A few months later, the next time I had to speak up, I was still nervous, but I had a clear message. It wasn't about becoming a perfect speaker. The real win was feeling heard, and that made all the difference.

Speaking Pace

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150 WPM

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Weak Words

7 words weakening your message

Hedging
just5actually1
Filler Words
4
TOTAL
um3
so1
Rhetorical Highlights

You used 2 rhetorical moments that made your speech engaging

0:09
0:49

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