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Speech by Steven Bartlett

Entrepreneurs should follow their instincts
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At age 15, my business studies teacher wrote in my report card,"Steve has an incredible tendency to ask a lot of questions, and although we admire his curiosity, it can, it can become very, very time-consuming." And he was right. At age 17, I remember jumping up in the common room when I saw the heads of my school debating which coffee machines to buy and asking them,"Why are you spending money on coffee machines? If you reason from first principles and think about this challenge we have ahead of us, we don't need to sift through catalogs and pay for coffee machines. We have 2,000 paying customers in our school. Surely the coffee machine companies should be paying us." And so on my break time, I went to the computer room, and I emailed the five coffee machine companies in the area, and within a month, our whole school and neighboring schools were equipped with coffee machines. Cool, right? But that sense of curiosity wouldn't always lead me to such successful outcomes. At 18, I'd started to question the conventional educational model, and that had led me to stop going to school. I stopped believing that school was gonna give me what I needed it to for me to become who I wanted to be. And so I, I stopped going. In a month after I stopped going, my attendance hits twenty percent, and I got expelled from school. And anyone who has an African mother, a traditional African mother, knows exactly why when the school called home and told them that I had been expelled, I took a long time to walk home. But I knew one thing for sure. I knew that I wanted to be an entrepreneur. I wanted to be a business person, and convention told me,"You go to university, you sit in the room, and if you wanna be something in life, you have to go to university and get that degree, that piece of paper." But being who I am, I started to convention-- con- I started to challenge that idea. Sat in my first lecture at university. I'm sat there, and I'm thinking,"You know, if I'm gonna be an entrepreneur, who am I gonna show this degree to? Is a degree from a bad university gonna work for me, or is it gonna work against me? And am I really going to learn what I need to learn about running a business by sitting in a lecture theater?" I decided that I didn't find that to be true, and so I did what Steve Bartlett always does. And a few months after I dropped out, I had an idea for a business. It was called Wallpark. The idea was to bring students into a, to a, to a social media realm where we could create a big wall, and the universities could participate, and students and anyone who had a stake in the student world. And Wallpark took me about 18 months to build, and then when I built it, I, I encountered a problem. I needed very important people to invest in my company. I need developers to join my team. I needed to get the attention of very, very important people. And again, I looked at the conventional way of doing that. The conventional way said you send out cold emails, and you make cold phone calls, right? But when I thought about that problem again from the most fundamental things that I knew to be true, that's not the answer I came to. Import-important people are busy. They get a lot of phone calls. They get a lot of emails. Those emails are impersonal. Often, they're handled by their PA. And if I was gonna attract their attention, I needed to do something different, right? And so I went to the shops, and I bought a big pile of gold envelopes. Big pile of gold envelopes because when you get a gold envelope in the post, right, you think you might have won something. You'll knock the other post out the way to get to that one, and especially if it's got your name written on it and, and, and a bow on it, and inside it has a handwritten letter. And that approach led to me to get investors in my company. It led Panasonic to send me tens of thousands of pounds worth of free equipment. And soon after, Wallpark launched. And when Wallpark launched, we encountered a problem or a challenge that virtually every business encounters. We had very little money, but we needed millions of people to come to our website if this was gonna work out, right? And so again, I did what I always did, but this time, I had no money. And when I say no money, I actually mean minus money. I had maxed out on all my credit cards. I'd managed to get three. I'd maxed out on all my overdrafts, so I'd managed to get four. I had a growing pile of bailiff letters on my desk. I'd got myself a CCJ. I was eating a concoction of powdered oats every single day, which is a, a mixture of flour, water, and powdered oats, and I'd lost about two stone in weight because I had no money. My computer no longer resembled a computer, and to get it to work, I had to solder the wires on it with a Christmas ball ball, and it would probably last for about half an hour in case-- it just-- unless I didn't move it. But nonetheless, we had to find a way to get millions of people to come to our website. Convention, of course, says, you know, if you wanna get students, you flyer them, and you put posters up, and you get ads in the student newspapers. But again, when we started from the most fundamental thing we knew to be true about that challenge, we were able to create a new solution. I mapped out the day of a student, starting from when they wake up in the morning to when they fall asleep at night, and I filled in everything in between. And we didn't see the opportunity to get a student to a website being flyering them on their way to their lecture. We thought,"They spend their time on the phone." And so we took their phones, and we looked at where they spent that time. And on a mobile phone, you can go into the settings and see exactly where someone's spending their time, and the answer was loud and clear. It was social media.And so we reasoned one step up from that. We said,"We need to be on social media." And I found a student Twitter page that had 3,000 followers run by a guy called Dom. I went and met Dom. I told him to drop out of university as well. Much to his mother's dismay, he did, and he joined me in Manchester, and we built all the largest student communities, uh, in this part of the world. We built 50 big student pages, and we used those pages to drive millions of people to our website every month. We had four million people on social media. We were getting about a million people come to our website every month. Fantastic. We won awards. As the traffic built, we were on TV, all over the papers. I was Wallpark guy."Hey, Steve, you Wallpark guy I am." But then we encountered our next problem. We needed to make money. Awkward. And so we looked at the conventional model, and the conventional model says, you know, you've got a website. All your traffic's coming from social media. All you gotta do is put brands on your website, right? But when you think about it, again, from the most fundamental things you know to be true, again, that model was broken. Brands just want students, right? We had four million students on social media. We had one million coming to our website directly from social media. Why did you need Wallpark? You can just put the brands on social media. And so I did what Steve Bartlett always does. After three years of building this company and building a team and being Wallpark guy, I quit. And I spent the next few months of my life round, going around the country, rounding up every young person in their bedroom who'd built a large social media account, and we still hire 25 of them full-time today. These kids have built some of the largest social media pages in the world. We owned hundreds and hundreds of these pages, and we connected this big chain, and we called it Social Chain. And then we encountered our next problem. We had a company come to us that had an addictive mobile game, and they said,"Hey, can you market this game for us?" We'd never marketed anyone else's product before, and so we, we looked at... We've got all these pages, and we looked at the challenge ahead of us. And convention says you can do paid ads on Facebook and Twitter to market an application, but when we drug- dug down even deeper into that model, we discovered that it's not that convincing for you to tell me that your product is good, and if people are gonna check out your product, you're gonna have to make them care. Right now, no one cares about this game, and there's so much noise on social media that it's really, really hard to be heard. And so, again, we went against convention. We flipped that model on its head, and from every one of our social media pages, we told everybody not to download this game."It would ruin your life if you download it." From our student pages, we said,"Do not download Tippi Tap. It will ruin your life. You won't get a degree. Retweet to save a degree." From our British pages, we said, we likened Tippi Tap to late buses, the Germans, and David Cameron. And that happened all at once one night, and that curiosity and that fear of missing out,"What is this thing? It's come left field," made two million people almost instantly download our game. It went to number one in the overall app store, where it sat above Facebook, Twitter, Instagram. It did hundreds of thousands in revenue in the first month. Thank God we had that revenue share. It trended number one on Twitter. It was on BBC News the next day. It was a phenomenon. And as the, our demand for our services built, we encountered a new challenge. We needed to hire really creative people. And so I did, I did what I always do. I looked at the conventional model. The conventional model said you, you, you take CVs, right? But CVs aren't an expression of someone's creativity, and it doesn't tell you anything about them. And who am I, as a dropout, to judge someone on how well-qualified they are? And I believe that if someone can creatively sell themselves, then they can probably sell our brands, and so we made our application process a competition of creativity. Here's one example. One day, someone flew an owl into, into my office. I am not lying. The owl landed on my arm, and it dropped a USB stick onto my desk. And that's not even the most ridiculous application we've had. The next challenge encountered was, how do you keep a room full of mainly dropouts together in a company? And we looked at what everyone else does in the space. They say,"I- impose rules, discipline. That should do it. That should control them." But I didn't believe in that either. We know that people will work harder if they love their job. They'll fight for it. They'll value it. They'll protect it. And fundamentally, families are stronger than teams, and if people love where they work, they'll like coming to work. And so I took an old derelict warehouse, converted it to a bit of a playground with slides and puppies and unlimited alcohol. No rules. You can have as many holidays as you like. You don't have to give notice periods. There's a zip wire being built into the office at the moment. There's trees, areas to sleep. And the company set one rule-... which still is written on the wall, on the chalkboard in our office today. Do not die. The company grew, and it grew, and it grew. And in 16 months, it's based in four locations around the world, over 60 full-time members of staff. In its first full year, it's set to do s- eight to 10 million in revenue. We've completely reimagined the way that we do business. Importantly to me, no one has ever left Social Chain. We've gone on to win some of the biggest awards in our industry, and even more importantly than all of that-... my mum's happy. When I look back at the moments that defined me and defined my journey, there's a clear and a very consistent pattern. I was brave enough to ignore convention and focus first on building solutions based on the problems I was experienced, based on the most fundamental truths that I could find, and I reasoned up from there. Although time-consuming, like my business studies teacher told me, that allowed me to create solutions that were innovative, designed for this moment, and designed for my circumstances. I believe this way of thinking can help you build better solutions for your life and can help us build a better future for ourselves and our kids. Thank you.
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This speech has a strong, memorable through-line: your best entrepreneurial leaps came when you ignored convention, returned to first principles, and trusted your instinct to act. The teacher-report-card opener and the “pattern” ending create a satisfying frame that makes the message feel earned.

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When I was 15, my business studies teacher wrote in my report card, “Steve has an incredible tendency to ask a lot of questions. And although we admire his curiosity, it can become very time-consuming.” He was right. At 17, I remember jumping up in the common room while the heads of my school were debating which coffee machines to buy. I asked, “Why are we spending money on coffee machines? If we reason from first principles, we don’t need to sift through catalogs and pay for coffee machines. We have 2,000 paying customers in this school. Surely the coffee machine companies should be paying us.” So on my break time, I went to the computer room and emailed the five coffee machine companies in the area. Within a month, our whole school and neighboring schools were equipped with coffee machines. Cool, right? But curiosity does not always lead to comfortable outcomes. At 18, I started questioning the conventional educational model. I stopped believing school was going to give me what I needed to become who I wanted to be, so I stopped going. My attendance hit 20 percent, and I got expelled. And anyone with a traditional African mother knows exactly why, when the school called home, I took a long time to walk home. Still, I knew one thing for sure. I wanted to be an entrepreneur. Convention told me the route was simple: go to university, sit in a room, and get the degree, that piece of paper. But I challenged it. In my first lecture, I’m sitting there thinking, “If I’m going to be an entrepreneur, who am I going to show this degree to? Is a degree from a bad university going to work for me, or against me? And am I really going to learn how to run a business by sitting in a lecture theater?” I decided the answer was no. A few months later, I dropped out. Then I had my first real idea. The idea was a business called Wallpark. It was meant to bring students into a social media world with one big wall where universities and anyone connected to student life could participate. It took me about 18 months to build. Then I hit the first big challenge: I needed very important people to invest. I needed developers. I needed attention. Convention said, “Send cold emails. Make cold calls.” But reasoning from what I knew to be true, that felt broken. Important people are busy. They get endless calls and emails. Those emails are impersonal, and often screened. So I did something different. I bought a big pile of gold envelopes. Because when you get a gold envelope in the post, you think you might have won something. You move everything else out of the way to get to that one. Especially if it has your name on it, a bow on it, and a handwritten letter inside. That approach got me investors. It got Panasonic to send me tens of thousands of pounds worth of free equipment. Wallpark launched. Then came the problem almost every business hits. We had very little money, but we needed millions of people to come to our website. And this time I truly had no money. When I say no money, I mean minus money. I’d maxed out all my credit cards. I’d maxed out all my overdrafts. I had a growing pile of bailiff letters on my desk. I’d got myself a CCJ. I was eating a concoction of powdered oats every day, basically flour, water, and powdered oats. I lost about two stone because I had no money. My computer barely resembled a computer. To get it to work, I had to solder the wires with a Christmas ball, and it would last about half an hour, as long as I did not move it. Convention said, “Flyer students. Put posters up. Buy ads in the student newspapers.” But again, I went back to fundamentals. I mapped a student’s day from waking up to falling asleep and filled in everything in between. The opportunity was not catching them on the way to a lecture. It was that they spent their time on their phones. So we checked where they spent that time. On a mobile phone, you can go into settings and see exactly where time goes. The answer was loud and clear. Social media. So we built there. I found a student Twitter page with 3,000 followers run by a guy called Dom. I met Dom. I told him to drop out of university too. Much to his mother’s dismay, he did. He joined me in Manchester, and together we built the largest student communities in this part of the world. We built 50 big student pages. Those pages drove millions of people to our website every month. We had four million people on social media. About a million people came to our website every month. We won awards. We were on TV and in the papers. I became “the Wallpark guy.” Then we hit the next problem. We needed to make money. Awkward. The conventional model said, “You’ve got a website. Put brands on the website.” But again, from first principles, it made no sense. Brands just want students. We had four million students on social media, and one million coming to our site from social media. Why did you need Wallpark? You could just put brands on social media. So after three years of building Wallpark, building a team, and being that guy, I quit. For the next few months, I went around the country rounding up every young person in their bedroom who had built a large social media account. We still hire 25 of them full-time today. We connected hundreds and hundreds of pages into one chain, and we called it Social Chain. Then another challenge arrived. A company came to us with an addictive mobile game and asked, “Can you market this for us?” We had never marketed anyone else’s product. Convention said, “Run paid ads on Facebook and Twitter.” But we dug into what was true. It is not convincing when you tell me your product is good. There is too much noise. Nobody cares about this game yet. If people are going to check it out, you have to make them care. So we flipped the model. From every one of our pages, we told everybody not to download the game. “It would ruin your life if you download it.” From our student pages: “Do not download Tippi Tap. It will ruin your life. You won’t get a degree. Retweet to save a degree.” From our British pages, we compared it to late buses, the Germans, and David Cameron. It all happened at once. That curiosity, that fear of missing out, that sense of “What is this thing, and why has it come from left field?” made two million people almost instantly download the game. It went to number one in the overall App Store, above Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. It did hundreds of thousands in revenue in the first month. Thank God we had that revenue share. It trended number one on Twitter. It was on BBC News the next day. It was a phenomenon. As demand grew, we hit the next challenge. We needed to hire really creative people. The conventional model said, “Take CVs.” But a CV is not an expression of creativity. It does not tell you who someone is. And who am I, as a dropout, to judge someone on how qualified they are? I believed that if someone can sell themselves creatively, they can sell our brands. So we made the application process a competition of creativity. One day, someone flew an owl into my office. I am not lying. The owl landed on my arm and dropped a USB stick onto my desk. And that is not even the most ridiculous application we have had. Then came another challenge: how do you keep a room full of mainly dropouts together in a company? People said, “Impose rules. Discipline. That will control them.” I did not believe that either. People work harder if they love their job. They will fight for it. They will value it. They will protect it. Families are stronger than teams. So I took an old derelict warehouse and turned it into a playground. Slides, puppies, unlimited alcohol. No rules. Take as many holidays as you like. No notice periods. There is a zip wire being built into the office right now. Trees. Areas to sleep. We set one rule, and it is still written on the wall in our office today. Do not die. And the company grew, and it grew, and it grew. In 16 months, it was in four locations around the world, with over 60 full-time staff. In its first full year, it was set to do eight to 10 million in revenue. We reimagined how we do business. Importantly to me, no one has ever left Social Chain. We have won some of the biggest awards in our industry. And even more importantly than all of that, my mum is happy. When I look back at the moments that defined me and my journey, there’s a clear, consistent pattern. Every time I made my best progress, I was brave enough to ignore convention and start with the fundamentals of the problem in front of me. Then I trusted my instincts to build a solution that fit my moment, my circumstances, and the truth of how people actually behave. Yes, it can be time-consuming, just like my teacher warned me. But it leads to solutions that are more innovative, more practical, and more real. And I believe that way of thinking can help you build better solutions in your own life. It can help us build a better future for ourselves, and for our kids. Thank you.

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When I was 15, my business studies teacher wrote in my report card, “Steve has an incredible tendency to ask a lot of questions. And although we admire his curiosity, it can become very time-consuming.” He was right. At 17, I remember jumping up in the common room while the heads of my school were debating which coffee machines to buy. I asked, “Why are we spending money on coffee machines? If we reason from first principles, we don’t need to sift through catalogs and pay for coffee machines. We have 2,000 paying customers in this school. Surely the coffee machine companies should be paying us.” So on my break time, I went to the computer room and emailed the five coffee machine companies in the area. Within a month, our whole school and neighboring schools were equipped with coffee machines. Cool, right? But curiosity does not always lead to comfortable outcomes. At 18, I started questioning the conventional educational model. I stopped believing school was going to give me what I needed to become who I wanted to be, so I stopped going. My attendance hit 20 percent, and I got expelled. And anyone with a traditional African mother knows exactly why, when the school called home, I took a long time to walk home. Still, I knew one thing for sure. I wanted to be an entrepreneur. Convention told me the route was simple: go to university, sit in a room, and get the degree, that piece of paper. But I challenged it. In my first lecture, I’m sitting there thinking, “If I’m going to be an entrepreneur, who am I going to show this degree to? Is a degree from a bad university going to work for me, or against me? And am I really going to learn how to run a business by sitting in a lecture theater?” I decided the answer was no. A few months later, I dropped out. Then I had my first real idea.

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The idea was a business called Wallpark. It was meant to bring students into a social media world with one big wall where universities and anyone connected to student life could participate. It took me about 18 months to build. Then I hit the first big challenge: I needed very important people to invest. I needed developers. I needed attention. Convention said, “Send cold emails. Make cold calls.” But reasoning from what I knew to be true, that felt broken. Important people are busy. They get endless calls and emails. Those emails are impersonal, and often screened. So I did something different. I bought a big pile of gold envelopes. Because when you get a gold envelope in the post, you think you might have won something. You move everything else out of the way to get to that one. Especially if it has your name on it, a bow on it, and a handwritten letter inside. That approach got me investors. It got Panasonic to send me tens of thousands of pounds worth of free equipment. Wallpark launched. Then came the problem almost every business hits. We had very little money, but we needed millions of people to come to our website. And this time I truly had no money. When I say no money, I mean minus money. I’d maxed out all my credit cards. I’d maxed out all my overdrafts. I had a growing pile of bailiff letters on my desk. I’d got myself a CCJ. I was eating a concoction of powdered oats every day, basically flour, water, and powdered oats. I lost about two stone because I had no money. My computer barely resembled a computer. To get it to work, I had to solder the wires with a Christmas ball, and it would last about half an hour, as long as I did not move it. Convention said, “Flyer students. Put posters up. Buy ads in the student newspapers.” But again, I went back to fundamentals. I mapped a student’s day from waking up to falling asleep and filled in everything in between. The opportunity was not catching them on the way to a lecture. It was that they spent their time on their phones. So we checked where they spent that time. On a mobile phone, you can go into settings and see exactly where time goes. The answer was loud and clear. Social media. So we built there. I found a student Twitter page with 3,000 followers run by a guy called Dom. I met Dom. I told him to drop out of university too. Much to his mother’s dismay, he did. He joined me in Manchester, and together we built the largest student communities in this part of the world. We built 50 big student pages. Those pages drove millions of people to our website every month. We had four million people on social media. About a million people came to our website every month. We won awards. We were on TV and in the papers. I became “the Wallpark guy.” Then we hit the next problem. We needed to make money. Awkward. The conventional model said, “You’ve got a website. Put brands on the website.” But again, from first principles, it made no sense. Brands just want students. We had four million students on social media, and one million coming to our site from social media. Why did you need Wallpark? You could just put brands on social media. So after three years of building Wallpark, building a team, and being that guy, I quit. For the next few months, I went around the country rounding up every young person in their bedroom who had built a large social media account. We still hire 25 of them full-time today. We connected hundreds and hundreds of pages into one chain, and we called it Social Chain. Then another challenge arrived. A company came to us with an addictive mobile game and asked, “Can you market this for us?” We had never marketed anyone else’s product. Convention said, “Run paid ads on Facebook and Twitter.” But we dug into what was true. It is not convincing when you tell me your product is good. There is too much noise. Nobody cares about this game yet. If people are going to check it out, you have to make them care. So we flipped the model. From every one of our pages, we told everybody not to download the game. “It would ruin your life if you download it.” From our student pages: “Do not download Tippi Tap. It will ruin your life. You won’t get a degree. Retweet to save a degree.” From our British pages, we compared it to late buses, the Germans, and David Cameron. It all happened at once. That curiosity, that fear of missing out, that sense of “What is this thing, and why has it come from left field?” made two million people almost instantly download the game. It went to number one in the overall App Store, above Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram. It did hundreds of thousands in revenue in the first month. Thank God we had that revenue share. It trended number one on Twitter. It was on BBC News the next day. It was a phenomenon. As demand grew, we hit the next challenge. We needed to hire really creative people. The conventional model said, “Take CVs.” But a CV is not an expression of creativity. It does not tell you who someone is. And who am I, as a dropout, to judge someone on how qualified they are? I believed that if someone can sell themselves creatively, they can sell our brands. So we made the application process a competition of creativity. One day, someone flew an owl into my office. I am not lying. The owl landed on my arm and dropped a USB stick onto my desk. And that is not even the most ridiculous application we have had. Then came another challenge: how do you keep a room full of mainly dropouts together in a company? People said, “Impose rules. Discipline. That will control them.” I did not believe that either. People work harder if they love their job. They will fight for it. They will value it. They will protect it. Families are stronger than teams. So I took an old derelict warehouse and turned it into a playground. Slides, puppies, unlimited alcohol. No rules. Take as many holidays as you like. No notice periods. There is a zip wire being built into the office right now. Trees. Areas to sleep. We set one rule, and it is still written on the wall in our office today. Do not die. And the company grew, and it grew, and it grew. In 16 months, it was in four locations around the world, with over 60 full-time staff. In its first full year, it was set to do eight to 10 million in revenue. We reimagined how we do business. Importantly to me, no one has ever left Social Chain. We have won some of the biggest awards in our industry. And even more importantly than all of that, my mum is happy.

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When I look back at the moments that defined me and my journey, there’s a clear, consistent pattern. Every time I made my best progress, I was brave enough to ignore convention and start with the fundamentals of the problem in front of me. Then I trusted my instincts to build a solution that fit my moment, my circumstances, and the truth of how people actually behave. Yes, it can be time-consuming, just like my teacher warned me. But it leads to solutions that are more innovative, more practical, and more real. And I believe that way of thinking can help you build better solutions in your own life. It can help us build a better future for ourselves, and for our kids. Thank you.

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