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Pitch by David Hsu
You deliver a crisp, confident story with memorable proof points (20 minutes on a sales call, $11K MRR in two months, $1.5M pilot). The main gaps are investor-completeness at the end and a market section that’s long on “huge” but light on a concrete, reachable wedge and sizing.
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Hook
A customer spent $200,000 and six months building an internal sales forecasting tool. We rebuilt it from scratch in Retool in 20 minutes, live, on the sales call.
Problem
Every company runs on custom internal tools, like the interface YouTube uses to review and approve uploaded videos. The problem is that most internal tools reuse the same basic building blocks, but engineering teams still rebuild them from scratch every time. That burns months of engineering time and hundreds of thousands of dollars on tooling instead of core product.
Solution
I’m David, and we’re Retool. Retool is a dramatically faster way to build custom internal tools.
How It Works
Retool gives teams pre-built components for common internal-tool UI and workflows. You drag and drop and compose those components to assemble the exact tool you need, instead of writing all the code from scratch.
Differentiation
That approach makes us about 50x faster than building the same internal tool from scratch every single time.
Market
This is a huge market. About 50% of all code in the world goes toward internal tools. And it’s not just Silicon Valley. Think of companies like Coca-Cola, where a massive amount of software is internal. One of our customers spends $400 million every year building these internal tools.
Traction
We’re two months in and already at $11K in MRR, live with 13 customers. That 75,000-person company signed a paid pilot with us, meaning they’re paying for a trial deployment before a broader rollout. We also have a paid pilot with a giant enterprise worth $1.5 million.
Business Model
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Team
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Ask
If you’re an investor, we’re raising [insert round size] to scale sales and product for internal-tool teams. If you have portfolio companies spending meaningful engineering time on internal tools, we want introductions to the engineering or ops leaders. Reach us at [insert email or URL] and we’ll get them live quickly.
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