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Sid Sijbrandij (GitLab)
Cohort CoachingYC W15 · 2 sessions
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Last Session
27 days ago
Mar 7, 6:16 PM
Assigned Practice
Sunday, March 1
Record a tighter investor version of your demo-day pitch with a clearer close.
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Submitted session
Mar 7, 6:16 PM
Pitch Progress
Coverage2 sessions
9/10 elements
2 strong3 ok4 weak
Missing
Problem
Needs work
HookSolutionMarketBusiness ModelTeamThe AskVision
Session History
Mar 7Sat#2
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Company
GitLab
$
Business Model
Paying customers (pricing/model not specified)
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Target Market
Companies/organizations working on software; developers
→
The Ask
Not mentioned in pitch
↗
Traction
Not mentioned in pitch
Elements
HookOK↑
SolutionOK
MarketWeak↑
Business ModelWeak↑
The AskWeak↑
ProblemMissing
How It WorksStrong↑
TractionStrong↑
TeamWeak
VisionOK↑
Feb 24Tue#1
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Company
GitLab
$
Business Model
Not mentioned in pitch
◎
Target Market
Software teams
→
The Ask
Not mentioned in pitch
↗
Traction
Not mentioned in pitch
Elements
HookWeak
SolutionOK
MarketMissing
Business ModelMissing
The AskMissing
ProblemMissing
How It WorksOK
TractionOK
TeamWeak
VisionWeak
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Student Note
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Big improvement in structure over the last two sessions. Next focus: slow down the opening and land the ask more directly.