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David Hsu (Retool)
Cohort CoachingYC W17 · 1 session
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Last Session
27 days ago
Mar 7, 6:16 PM
Assigned Practice
Monday, March 2
Re-record your pitch with simpler market language and a clearer business model transition.
Pitch·SubmittedNeeds review
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Mar 7, 6:16 PM
Pitch Progress
Coverage1 session
10/10 elements
4 strong2 ok4 weak
Needs work
HookTractionBusiness ModelTeamThe AskVision
Session History
Mar 7Sat#1
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Company
Retool
$
Business Model
Paid pilots; $11K MRR
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Target Market
Companies building custom internal tools (including large enterprises)
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The Ask
Not mentioned in pitch
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Traction
Not mentioned in pitch
Elements
HookOK
SolutionStrong
MarketStrong
Business ModelWeak
The AskWeak
ProblemStrong
How It WorksStrong
TractionOK
TeamWeak
VisionWeak
Student Note
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Excellent traction proof. The main coaching focus is translating technical language into plain investor language.